2025年全國二卷高考英語作文深度解析及寫作指導(dǎo)

年高考真題英語作文深度點評與分析2025年高考英語全國Ⅱ卷寫作第一節(jié)以給外教寫郵件詢問稿件相關(guān)事宜為情境，要求學(xué)生給上個月答應(yīng)寫介紹加拿大體育運動文章的外教Chris寫郵件，內(nèi)容涵蓋詢問進(jìn)展和提醒交稿日期，寫作詞數(shù)約80。這道試題綜合考查學(xué)生多項關(guān)鍵能力。從邏輯思維層面來看，學(xué)生需合理規(guī)劃郵件內(nèi)容結(jié)構(gòu)，先禮貌詢問稿件進(jìn)展，再委婉提醒交稿日期，整個行文邏輯要清晰順暢，使外教能快速把握重點，這要求學(xué)生具備良好的邏輯組織與構(gòu)思能力。在跨文化溝通方面，郵件作為與外教的交流載體，學(xué)生得充分考慮文化差異，運用符合英語文化習(xí)慣且得體禮貌的語言進(jìn)行溝通，避免中式英語思維，精準(zhǔn)傳遞自身關(guān)切之意，展現(xiàn)良好的跨文化交際素養(yǎng)，體現(xiàn)對不同文化背景的尊重。于語言表達(dá)而言，學(xué)生需在有限字?jǐn)?shù)內(nèi)，精準(zhǔn)運用英語詞匯、語法，簡潔明了又不失禮貌地表達(dá)詢問與提醒，要妥善選擇合適的詞匯和句式結(jié)構(gòu)，以達(dá)成良好的溝通效果，這對學(xué)生的英語語言運用精準(zhǔn)度和熟練度是極大的考驗。總體而言，該作文題緊密貼合實際生活場景，聚焦學(xué)生邏輯思維、跨文化溝通及語言表達(dá)等綜合能力考查，契合高考英語寫作命題導(dǎo)向，旨在引導(dǎo)學(xué)生在真實情境中運用英語解決實際問題，提升綜合語言運用能力，為學(xué)生未來跨文化交流奠定基礎(chǔ)。注意本次應(yīng)用文寫作的創(chuàng)新之處在于，它沒有讓考生生硬地寫一封“催稿信”，而是要考生寫一封“以詢問進(jìn)展為切入點的提醒信”。這就要求考生不僅要會寫信，更要懂得溝通的藝術(shù)和策略。假定你是李華，外教Chris上個月答應(yīng)寫一篇介紹加拿大體育運動的文章，請你給他寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.詢問進(jìn)展；2.提醒交稿日期。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearChris,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua根據(jù)題目和提綱要點“詢問文章進(jìn)度+提醒交稿時間”，可以看出，新高考Ⅱ卷作文本質(zhì)上是在考察詢問和提醒的交際場景。核心要完成兩項要點內(nèi)容：一是“詢問進(jìn)度”，即了解外教撰寫介紹加拿大體育運動文章的進(jìn)展情況；二是“提醒交稿日期”，要清晰、委婉地告知外教文章提交的截止時間，推動寫作任務(wù)按計劃完成在寫作時要清晰明了地表明自己想要了解什么，所咨詢的問題不能侵犯對方的隱私或尊嚴(yán)，要體現(xiàn)社交禮儀中的禮貌、委婉、尊重和理解，語氣要誠懇，不可使用帶有生硬語氣或命令口吻的詞句。結(jié)尾一定要表示感謝并表達(dá)期待。。本題的難點在于要點背后的補(bǔ)充內(nèi)容。體裁：書信（工作溝通類），用于和外教溝通約稿進(jìn)度，屬于校園英文報編輯日常工作交流的應(yīng)用文體裁。內(nèi)容：先表明身份（校英文報編輯李華）和寫信目的（詢問上月約稿介紹加拿大體育運動文章的進(jìn)展）；接著說明刊物出版計劃，用委婉表達(dá)“couldyouplease...”提醒交稿時間（設(shè)定本周五，明確具體），并簡單提及對方文章對刊物的積極作用（讓報紙更有吸引力）；最后禮貌期待回復(fù)，符合郵件溝通邏輯與禮貌性。語言：簡潔清晰，用“checktheprogressof...”“promisedtowrite”“submit”等約稿、編輯工作相關(guān)詞匯，“make...moreappealing”等表達(dá)讓溝通更得體，滿足80詞左右要求。寫作思路--建議三段式（1）首段：禮貌問候，引出話題①第一句問候：Ihopethismessagefindsyouwell.或者Ihopeyou'vebeenwell.②第二句表明來意，詢問文章進(jìn)展：I'mwritingtoenquireabout...（2）正文：①詢問進(jìn)度。表達(dá)對外教老師文章的期待：Wearelookingforwardto...或者Weareeagerto...詢問進(jìn)展如何：I'mwonderingifyoucouldtellme...或者Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldletmeknow...②提醒交稿日期。明確指出截止時間submissiondeadline，給出善意的提醒friendlyreminder。（3）尾段：表達(dá)感謝與支持。①第一句再次感謝。②第二句竭盡所能提供支持。開篇：自我介紹+寫信意圖——詢問1.I’mLiHua,ahighschoolstudentplanningtoparticipateintheEnglishSpeechContesttobeheldnextweek.Iamwritingtoenquireaboutfurtherdetailsaboutit.我是高中生李華，計劃參加下周即將舉辦的英語演講比賽。我寫信來咨詢關(guān)于比賽的更多細(xì)節(jié)。2.Quiteinterestedinthepositionposted,Iamwritingtoseeifitispossibleforyoutoprovidemewithspecificinformationconcerning/regardingit.我對發(fā)布的崗位非常感興趣，寫信是看你是否可能為我提供有關(guān)它的具體信息。3.Ihappenedtocomeacrossyouradvertisementinthenewspaper.Iamwonderingifitisconvenientforyoutokeepmeinformedofsomethingrelevantaboutthesummercamp.碰巧我在報紙上看到這則廣告。不知道您是否方便告知關(guān)于夏令營的相關(guān)信息。4.Iwouldbegrateful/Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldoffermoredetails(that)Ispeciallyneedtopayattentionto.如您能告知其他如需注意事項，我將不勝感激。5.Itwouldbebetterifyoucouldexplainsomeconfusingpointsindetail.如果你能詳細(xì)解釋一些令人困惑的問題會更好。正文：征詢具體信息+原因+分條1.Tostartwith,couldyoupleasebesokindastosendmeanapplicationformandothermaterialsnecessaryformyapplication?首先，你能否寄給我一份申請表及與申請有關(guān)的其他必要的材料？2.Asforthemoneyyoucharge,anotherpointIamnotcertainaboutisifitcoverstheadmissionfeesfortheplaceslisted.關(guān)于收費，我不確定的另一點是它是否包含所列地點的門票。3.Inaddition,itisstilluncleartome(Iamstillnotsureabout)howmuchIhavetopayforthecourseandwhetheraccommodationisincluded.另外，我還不清楚需付多少學(xué)費，是否包括住宿。4.Besides,isthereanythingthatdeservesspecialattention?此外，有沒有需要特別注意的事情？5.Lastly,IwouldbemorethanobligedifyoucouldkeepmeinformedoftheproceduresIhavetogothroughsothatIcanmakeproperarrangements.最后，如您能告知我那些必須經(jīng)過的程序以便安排，我將不勝感激。結(jié)尾：期待回復(fù)并表示感謝1.

Thankyouforyourkindness,andyourpromptattentionandreplytothisletterwillbehighlyappreciated.感謝您的善意，對于您及時的關(guān)注和回復(fù)這封信我將非常感激。2.Iamlookingforwardtoyourprompt/immediate/earlyreply.期待盡早得到您的答復(fù)。3.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldreplyatyourearliestconvenience.如果您能盡早回復(fù)，我會很感激。4.Sorrytobotheryou.Yourkindhelpwouldbegreatlyappreciated.很抱歉打擾您，對您的友善幫助不勝感激。5.I'dbegratefulifyoucouldprovidemewiththerelevantinformation.如果您能為我提供相關(guān)信息，我將不勝感激。6.Youradviceandrecommendationswillsurelybeofgreathelptome.你的建議和推薦一定會對我大有幫助。一、【2024年高考英語作文新課標(biāo)Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷原題】假定你是李華，你們班上周五在公園上了一節(jié)美術(shù)課，請給英國好友Chris寫一封郵件分享你的經(jīng)歷，內(nèi)容包括:1.你的作品內(nèi)容:2.你的感想。注意:1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearChris,IamwritingtosharewithyouanartclassIhadintheparklastFriday.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best,LiHua二、從近三年的高考作文題分析命題趨勢年份卷別體裁話題主題語境內(nèi)容2025新高考Ⅰ卷建議信學(xué)校生活從給出的兩個欄目做出選擇并說明理由2024新高考Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷告知信學(xué)校生活介紹美術(shù)課的個人作品和感想2023新高考Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷建議信學(xué)校生活給外教提建議一、主題內(nèi)容：聚焦校園生活，拓展多元視角2023-2025年高考英語作文主題緊密圍繞校園生活，但展現(xiàn)多元視角。2025年Ⅱ卷建議信以班級英語報增設(shè)欄目為情境，要求從兩個選項中抉擇并說明理由，既考查學(xué)生對校園媒體建設(shè)的思考，又引導(dǎo)其權(quán)衡不同活動板塊的價值，三者均以校園生活為核心，從教學(xué)優(yōu)化、個人成長到文化活動建設(shè)，逐步拓展校園生活內(nèi)涵。2024年Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷告知信聚焦美術(shù)課個人作品及感想，關(guān)注學(xué)生藝術(shù)素養(yǎng)、個性發(fā)展，引導(dǎo)學(xué)生表達(dá)對校園文化活動的體驗。2023年Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷建議信要求學(xué)生給外教提建議，涉及教學(xué)活動優(yōu)化等內(nèi)容，側(cè)重學(xué)生對校園教學(xué)的主動思考與反饋。《新課標(biāo)》中對應(yīng)用文寫作的六個考核點全部覆蓋，但是側(cè)重于描述人或事、闡述觀點和表達(dá)情感態(tài)度，這是與著重培養(yǎng)學(xué)生思維品質(zhì)分不開的。其次，熱點話題非考查重點。近三年不同類型的試題考查內(nèi)容并非當(dāng)年的熱點話題，而是著重于學(xué)生德智體美勞的培養(yǎng)，著重于培養(yǎng)學(xué)生“用英語做事”的能力。此外，體裁考查較為穩(wěn)定。近三年的體裁基本穩(wěn)定在投稿、報道、邀請信和電子郵件，尤其是投稿和報道居多，考生的寫作對象就更為寬泛。最后，凸顯情境化、實用化。所有考題都設(shè)置了真實的情境，考查學(xué)生在不同情境下使用語言的得體性。近三年的全國Ⅰ、Ⅱ卷尤其注重考查學(xué)生解決在校的實際問題。二、命題導(dǎo)向：素養(yǎng)培育為核，提升綜合能力2023-2025年高考英語作文命題堅持立德樹人根本任務(wù)，以培育學(xué)生核心素養(yǎng)為導(dǎo)向。2023年建議信考查學(xué)生對教學(xué)活動的思考與反饋能力，引導(dǎo)其積極參與校園教學(xué)優(yōu)化。2024年告知信關(guān)注學(xué)生藝術(shù)素養(yǎng)和創(chuàng)造力，鼓勵其分享個人藝術(shù)體驗，提升審美與表達(dá)能力。2025年建議信則要求學(xué)生權(quán)衡欄目價值，鍛煉批判性思維與決策能力，同時激發(fā)學(xué)生對校園文化建設(shè)的思考。這種命題導(dǎo)向強(qiáng)調(diào)學(xué)生素養(yǎng)的全面培育，使其在掌握英語知識與技能的基礎(chǔ)上，具備批判性思維、創(chuàng)造力和文化意識等綜合素養(yǎng)，以適應(yīng)未來社會需求。高考英語應(yīng)用文寫作是考查學(xué)生綜合語言運用能力的重要部分，尤其是全國Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷的命題趨勢，越來越注重對學(xué)生核心素養(yǎng)的考查。以下是針對歷年高考英語全國Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷應(yīng)用文寫作的備考建議，從作文話題選材和不同體裁的高效訓(xùn)練兩個方面展開。一）應(yīng)用文寫作的話題選材（一）緊扣高考評價體系的核心目標(biāo)高考評價體系強(qiáng)調(diào)“立德樹人”的根本任務(wù)，要求作文話題選材體現(xiàn)德育、智育、體育、美育和勞動教育的主題。例如，2024年1月浙江卷的應(yīng)用文寫作要求學(xué)生向校報推薦一項課間運動，這不僅考查了學(xué)生對體育運動的了解，還引導(dǎo)他們關(guān)注健康生活，體現(xiàn)了體育教育的主題。在備考中，教師應(yīng)引導(dǎo)學(xué)生關(guān)注這些主題，通過寫作任務(wù)讓學(xué)生在語言表達(dá)中體現(xiàn)正確的價值觀。（二）貼合學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)生活的真實情境歷年高考英語全國Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷的寫作題目常常結(jié)合學(xué)生的真實生活情境，要求學(xué)生在中西方文化交際背景下完成寫作。比如2019年全國卷III要求學(xué)生寫一封郵件邀請英國朋友參加學(xué)校音樂節(jié)，這不僅考查了學(xué)生撰寫邀請信的能力，還要求他們考慮到跨文化交流的因素，體現(xiàn)出對不同文化的理解和尊重。教師在備考時可以設(shè)計類似的情境寫作任務(wù)，讓學(xué)生在真實情境中鍛煉寫作能力。(二)不同體裁的高效訓(xùn)練一）全方位多體裁的應(yīng)用文寫作教學(xué)全國卷1的寫作題型多樣，包括書信、通知、報道、發(fā)言稿等。教師在日常教學(xué)中不能只局限于書信體的訓(xùn)練，而應(yīng)設(shè)計同一話題不同體裁的寫作任務(wù)，優(yōu)化作文課堂教學(xué)。例如，可以圍繞“環(huán)境保護(hù)”這一主題，分別設(shè)計書信、倡議書、演講稿等不同體裁的寫作練習(xí)，讓學(xué)生在不同體裁中靈活運用語言，提升寫作能力。二）注重寫作技巧的指導(dǎo)在備考過程中，教師需要對學(xué)生進(jìn)行寫作技巧的指導(dǎo)。例如，指導(dǎo)學(xué)生如何使用高級詞匯和復(fù)雜句型來提升文章質(zhì)量，如何通過信號詞使文章邏輯清晰。同時，教師還應(yīng)引導(dǎo)學(xué)生關(guān)注寫作格式的規(guī)范性，如書信的格式、通知的結(jié)構(gòu)等。通過這些技巧的訓(xùn)練，學(xué)生可以在有限的時間內(nèi)寫出高質(zhì)量的作文。三）強(qiáng)化思維訓(xùn)練高考應(yīng)用文寫作的開放性越來越強(qiáng)，要求學(xué)生具備較強(qiáng)的思維能力。教師可以通過設(shè)計開放性寫作任務(wù)，如讓學(xué)生寫一篇關(guān)于“失敗的教訓(xùn)”的短文，來培養(yǎng)學(xué)生的思維品質(zhì)和價值觀念。這種訓(xùn)練不僅有助于學(xué)生應(yīng)對高考寫作，還能提升他們的綜合素質(zhì)。1.邀請信邀請信多為宴會，比賽，展覽等活動的邀請信件，要求敘事清楚明白。其主要包含三個方面的內(nèi)容：1.表明意圖，即邀請對方參加活動以及邀請對方的原因；2.介紹活動的相關(guān)具體內(nèi)容；3.期待對方接受邀請1. 開篇表明寫信目的及原因Asastudentwhoadmiresyou,Iamwritingthislettertoinviteyoutogoto…on….Hearingthatmyschoolisscheduledtoholda…,I’mwritingtosincerelyinviteyoutoparticipateinthisevent.Knowingthatyouhaveafancyfor/youarekeenon…,Iwouldliketoinviteyoutocometo…(活動),(which…/whosethemeis…)(如有需要，后面可用定語從句對活動進(jìn)行補(bǔ)充說明)Onbehalfof…,I‘mwritingtoinviteyoutobeajudgeatour…I’mmorethandelightedtowritetosincerelyinviteyouto……2. 說明活動的時間，地點以及內(nèi)容等信息This…willtakeplace/willbeheld/started+時間+地點,(whichwilllastabout…)The…willcelebrate+活動+地點+日期(anditisexpectedtolastfrom…to…)…willfallonJanuary8th,andthatdayisnextWednesdaywhenyoucancometo…Duringthevisit,wewilllearnabundantinformationabout…We’llbehavinga…afterwhichweareto…What’smore,wewillhaveachancetoappreciate…,whichisaverygoodchanceto…(獲得的好處或能學(xué)習(xí)到的內(nèi)容).Thisactivityisgreatlyimportant/ofgreatimportance,throughwhichyoucanknowmoreabout…(與活動相關(guān)的內(nèi)容)Variousactivitiesareavailableinaddingflavortothe…Everythingwilloverflowwithhappinessthen.Ibelieveitwillbeanenjoyableexperienceforyoutolearn…AndIbetyouwillbeimpressedby…itwouldbeagreatpleasureformetokeepyoucompany.…3. 最后表達(dá)期待Iwillbegratefulifyoutakemyinvitationseriously.Iknowyou’reinterestedin…,sowhynotjoinusandhaveagoodtime?Istronglyhopeyoucanhaveatryandthe…willneverdisappointyou.(Isincerelyhopeyoucansparesometimeand)Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldacceptmyinvitation.(Thankyouinadvanceandwishyouallthebest.)Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldconfirmyourparticipationatyourearliestconvenience.Ihopeyouwillacceptmyinvitationifitisconvenientforyou.Shouldyougo(如果你去的話),Iwillbookaticketforyouinadvance/Iwillpickyouupat…Willyoubeavailableduringthattime?Pleasecontactmeat…atyourearliestconvenience.…2.申請信申請信用于向單位或組織提出請求或申請。申請信語氣要誠摯友好，其寫作步驟為：1.介紹自己，簡要說明信息來源并提出申請；2.突出自己的特點，具體說明勝任的理由；3.請求給予機(jī)會，期望盡快回復(fù)。首段介紹及提出申請Hearingyouarelookingforvolunteersforthecoming…,Ican’twaittowritetoapplytobeavolunteer.I’mmorethanhappytolearnfrom…(信息來源)that…AndI’manxiousforthechance.I’mgladtoseeyouradvertisementontheinternet.Willingtobe…,I’mwritingtoapplyfortheposition.Knowingfrom…thatyouarerecruiting…,I’mwritingtoapplyfortheveryposition.Iamwritingtoapplytojoininyour…,astheideaisappealingtome.…說明自己的優(yōu)勢或能勝任的理由IamsureIcanbeaqualifiedmember.Equippedwith…,Ihaveenoughconfidenceinapplyingfortheposition.IbelieveIamequaltothejob.NotonlycanI…,butIalsohaveamplefaithinmycompetencein…,(whichmaybeasatisfyingadvantageoverothers.)Iamfamiliarwithcomputeroperationandofficesoftware,whichcanhelpmedo/enablemetodotheofficeworkverywell.IhavebeenlearningEnglishfor10years,andIspeakfluentEnglish/IcanspeakEnglishwithgreatfluency/myoralEnglishisgoodenoughtocommunicatewithforeignersfluently.Ihaveagoodknowledgeof…Apartfromthat,Iamanexpertat…Foronething,Idowellin…Foranother,Itookpartinmany…inwhichIperformedwellandgainedrichexperience.Myinterestandskillin…contributestomyapplicationforavolunteer.Havingbeenlearningfor…,Ihaveagoodcommandof…Ihaveparticipatedinseveralsimilaractivities,whichequippedmewithrelevantexperience/skills.Therefore,Ithink/anconvincedI’mqualifiedtoserveinthe……請求給予機(jī)會Iwouldgreatlyappreciateitifyoucouldoffermeapreciousopportunitytoaninterview./myapplicationcouldmeetwithyourapproval.Iwouldbeverygrateful/obligedifyoucouldsendmemoreinformationaboutthepostavailable.Wouldyoupleasesendmethenecessaryapplicationformsandanyfurtherdetailsabout…?Isincerelyhopethatmyapplicationcouldbeconsidered.Ireallywanttoobtainthispreciousopportunity.ThankyouforconsideringmyapplicationandIamlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Ifyourequiremoreinformation,pleasefeelfreetocontactme.IfIamaccepted,Iwillactasabridgebetween…andsparenoeffortsto…WiththeexperienceI’veaccumulated,Iamconfidenttoliveuptoyourexpectations.…3.求助信求助信是當(dāng)個人遇到一些自己無法解決的問題或困難時向別人請求幫助的一種書信，內(nèi)容通常包括：1.表明寫信目的，請求幫助；2.清晰陳述請求幫助的內(nèi)容；3.希望得到幫助，并向收信人表示感謝。簡單自我介紹；表明寫信目的I’mwritingthislettertoaskyoutodomeafavor/givemeahand.SorrytobotheryoubutIreallygetsometrouble/problemsrecently.Facedwith/facingsomuchdifficulty,Ihavetoaskyouforsomehelp.AsI’vegainedanopportunityto…/Havingacquiredapreciouschanceto…,I’mwritingtoaskforyourassistance/seekforyouradvice.Ihopeyouwillnotmindmewritingtoaskifyouareavailabletooffermesomeguidance,as……陳述請求幫助的內(nèi)容Ifacethechoicebetween…and…I’mfacingthreeproblemswhichtroublemealot.Tobeginwith,…What’smore/worse/Worsestill,…Whattroublesmemostis…Eversincelastmonth,mymotherhasn’tallowedmeto…Inheropinion,…However,Idon’tagreewithher.…Last…,Ihaveanargumentwithmybestfriendandwehaven’ttalkedtoeachothersincethen.Recently,I…(最近在做的事兒).Findingit…(事情的特點，可好可壞；如果是好的特點，可以在句中加入however),Iamhavingproblemswith…,(whichmakesmefeelanxious.)…(陳述情況).So,I’mwonderingwhetheryoucould…(提出具體需要的幫助)Ihopeyoucouldsparemesometimeto…Andsomeguidanceon…isbadlyneededaswell.Thisbeingmyfirsttimeto…IamsoexcitedandnervousthatIcan’ttakeallthingsintoaccount.Thus,ifyouwouldgivemesomesuggestionson…,Iwouldappreciateitdeeply.Facedwiththissituation,whatshouldIdo?…希望得到幫助Facedwiththeaboveproblems,Iamanxious/longing/desperateforyourhelp.Wouldyoupleaseoffermesomeadviceon…?Iwonderifyoucanhelpmewiththesedifficulties.Ireallyappreciateitifyoucouldhelpme.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldoffermeahand.Nowordsarestrongenoughtoconveymyappreciationifyoucouldoffermeahand.ThanksforyourkindconsiderationandIamlookingforwardtoreceivingyourearliestreply.Thanksforyourattentiontotheserequests.Ifyouhaveanyquestions,donothesitatetocontactme.Iamlookingforwardtoafavorablereply.Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldhelpmesolvemyproblem.Yourearlyreplywillbehighlyappreciated.Iwillbemorethanhappyifyoucancometomyaid.Yourtimelyhelpwillbehighlyappreciated.…4.建議信建議信是寫信人向收信人對某事提出建議和忠告的一種應(yīng)用文形式，有可能是寫給個人，就其遇到的某個問題提出自己的看法和觀點；也可能是寫給某個組織或機(jī)構(gòu)，就改進(jìn)其服務(wù)提出建議或忠告。建議信要交代清楚寫信的原因，建議的內(nèi)容，提出建議的理由(提出的理由要合情合理，用語禮貌)。建議信要寫的簡明扼要，目的明確，具有合理性和說服力。首段：表明寫作意圖：(簡單介紹自己)陳述事由I’mverygladtohavereceivedyoure-mail.NowI’mwritingtogiveyousomeadviceon…I’msorrytohearthatyouarehavingtrouble…Suchproblemsarequitenormal.Perhapsthefollowingsuggestionsarehelpful.Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto…,andIwilltrytomakesomesuggestionshere.I’mwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning…/conveymyconcernabout…Inresponsetoyourlettertellingme/sayingyouhopeto…,Ihavesomeideasforyou.I’msorrytohearyou’rehavingdifficulty/troublein…;I’monlytoowillingtohelpyouandmytipsareasfollows.…主體：在肯定對方優(yōu)點的基礎(chǔ)上提出需要改進(jìn)的地方，或針對具體情況提出具體建議或忠告。Ifellthatitwouldbebeneficialif…Ihighlyrecommendedthat…Ithinkthemostsuitable…foryouis…,sothat…Doing…(方法)means…(好處)Itisalsoagoodideato…Itisadvisablethat…Itisstronglyadvised/suggestedthat…Thus,…IfIwereyou,Iwould…Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard.…尾段：對提出的建議進(jìn)行總結(jié)，要注意用語禮貌，使對方容易接受。Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount/youwilltakeaccountofmysuggestions.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestions/recommendationspractical/useful/helpful.Isincerelyhopemyadvicewillbeofsomehelp/usetoyou.IfthereismorethatIcandotohelp,pleasedon’thesitatetoletmeknow.Iwouldbewillingtodiscussthismatterwithyoutofurtherdetails.…旅游參觀類單詞：Accommodation(n.)住宿Arrange(v.)安排——arrangement(n.)Bookinadvance/reserve(v.)預(yù)定Convenient(adj.)方便的——convenience(n.)Delay(v.)延遲Destination(n.)目的地Journey/tour(n.)旅行Voyage(n.)航行License(n.)駕照Schedule(n.)日程表Transport(n.)運輸，交通Pack(v.)收拾行李Scenery/view(n.)景色Landscape(n.)山水Impressive(adj.)令人贊嘆的Breathtaking(adj.)令人驚嘆的Picturesque(adj.)風(fēng)景如畫的Mountainous(adj.)多山的…詞語Atouristattraction/ascenicspot旅游景點Aplaceofinterest名勝古跡Amust-seeplace必游之地Asummerresort避暑勝地Beonvocation度假Be/getstuck/trappedintrafficjams/beheldupintraffic陷入交通堵塞Befascinated/struckby被…迷住Haveagoodviewof…一覽無余Beyonddescription/expression難以形容Catch/attract/drawone’seye/attention吸引某人的注意力Broaden/widenone’shorizon/enrichone’sknowledge開拓視野/豐富知識Checkin/out登記入住/退房Atravelagency/brochure/journal旅行社/指南/日志…句子Irecommendthecapitalcity,Beijing,toyou,foritisanamazingcitywithalonghistoryandavarietyofplacesofinterest.Youmayfirstgoto…,wheremanytouristsadmire…Thenextplacethatyoucan’tmissIs…,whichisoneofthegreatwondersintheworld.The…and…arewellworthvisiting,too./The…and…areamust,aswell.Besides,thelocalsnackswillsurelybeappealingtoyou.It’sneithertoohotnortoocoldin….Bringingsomelightsummerclotheswilldo.Asfor…,peoplehereareusedto……islocatedinthe…andhasareputationof“…”sinceancienttimes.Itcoversanareaof…withmanybeautifulsceneryspotshere.Withbreathtakingsceneryaswellas…,itiscertainlyyourtopchoice.Iadvisethatyouillustratethethemefromthreeaspects——ancientarchitecture,exoticfoodandtraditionalculturein….Whatdistinguishes…fromothersisits…/that……與人相處單詞：Argue(v.)爭論——argument(n.)Blame(v.)指責(zé)Bother(v.)打擾，麻煩Interrupt(v.)打斷Cheat(v.)欺騙Complain(v.)抱怨Forgive(v.)原諒——forgiveness(n.)Harmony(n.)和諧——harmonious(adj.)Misunderstand(v.)誤解——misunderstanding(n.)…短語Apologize/makeanapologytosb.fordoing…因某事向某人道歉Believeineachother彼此信任Exchangeideas/emotions/information交流思想/情感/信息Geton(well)with…與…相處(融洽)Havealotincommonwith…與…有許多共同之處Helpsb.out幫助某人擺脫困境Keep/breakone’spromise遵守/違背諾言Keepsb.company陪伴某人Promote/strengthen/treasurefriendship增進(jìn)/加強(qiáng)/珍惜友誼Putupwith忍受Sharejoysandsorrows同甘共苦Turntosb.forhelp向某人求助…句子You’dbetterfindoutwhatgotyouintosuchamess,andthenturnto…foradvice.Whynotopenyourmindtocommunicatewithyourfriendsfrankly?It’swisetobereadytohelpyourfriendsandthepeoplearoundyou.Inthisway,youcannotonlywinbackyouroldfriendsbutalsomakesomenewones.ButthenIthoughtofthingsfromtheirpointofview.Justasthesayinggoes,“Onetreedoesn’tmakeaforest.”O(jiān)ursuccessisbasedoncooperationwithothers.…語言學(xué)習(xí)Accent(n.)口音Pronounce發(fā)音——pronunciation(n.)Vocabulary(n.)詞匯Saying/proverb(n.)諺語Idiom(n.)習(xí)語Accurate(adj.)準(zhǔn)確的——accuracy(n.)Efficient(adj.)有效率的Fluent(adj.)流利的——fluency(n.)Express(v.)表達(dá)——expression(n.)Translate(v.)翻譯——translation(n.)Accumulate(v.)積累Grasp領(lǐng)會，掌握Master精通，掌握…短語Attachimportanceto…/take…seriously重視Beafraidofmakingmistakes/errors害怕出錯Beawareoftheimportanceoflifelonglearning意識到終身學(xué)習(xí)的重要性Enlargeone’svocabulary擴(kuò)大某人詞匯量Expressoneselfin…fluently用…流利地表達(dá)自己Givesb.someadvice/tipsonhowtolearn…well就如何學(xué)好…給出建議Goover/reviewlessons復(fù)習(xí)Preparefor/previewlessons預(yù)習(xí)Keep/bear…inmind/learn…byheart記住Makefulluseof/makethebestof/makethemostof…充分利用…Anativelanguage/mothertongue母語…句型ThereisnodoubtthatkeepinganEnglishdiaryhelpsyoualotwithyourwrittenEnglish.Youaresupposedtoadoptavarietyof/variousstrategiestomemorizeEnglishwords.HereareseveraltipsonhowtolearnEnglishwell.Firstly,youshouldsparenoefforttoreadinterestingEnglishnews,whichcanhelpyoudevelopyourinterestinEnglish.Asweknow,languagelearningisneveraneasytask,butneedspainstakingeffortsandpatience.Personally,Ithinkyou’dbetterpaycloseattentiontotheformaluseofChinesewordsandexpressions,whichreallycounts.Youmayaswellwatchmore…materialsasmuchasyoucanafford.Languageclasscanprovideanenvironmentwhereyoucanpracticeundertheguidanceofsomeonewho’sgoodatlanguage.…5.道歉信道歉信是指因過失或疏忽做錯了事，或無法答應(yīng)對方所請所托，給予對方賠禮道歉并請求對方原諒的信件。步驟如下：1.表明寫信意圖，對某事表示歉意；2.說明道歉的具體原因；3.提供補(bǔ)救措施，請求收信人原諒表明寫作意圖IamwritingthislettertoapologizeforthemistakeImadein…Iexpressmyregretatbeingunableto…IamindeedverysorryforwhatIdid/said,butpleasebelieveIhadnointentionto…Muchtomyregret/IamterriblysorrythatIamunableto…I’mwritingthislettertomakeanapologytoyoubecauseIcan’tgoto…asplanned.I’mdeeplysorrybutIhavetoletyouknowthat…I’mexpressingmydeepestapologyformycarelessness.Iwritingtoaskyoutoexcusemefornotbeingabletokeepourappointment.Idoknowthatthisisveryimpoliteandmusthavecausedyoumuchtrouble.IfeelextremelysorrythatIhavetobeabsentfrom…,whichIoncepromisedforspecialreasons.…說明具體原因無法參加某活動或不能赴約等=1\*GB3①臨時有事不能參加(通知考試/家人回國需要接機(jī)/…)(強(qiáng)調(diào)事件對自己的重要性)=1\*romani.ItismainlybecauseatthattimeIwillbefullyoccupiedby…,whichisquiteoutofmyexpectation,andthatconflictswith…=2\*romanii.Iamforcedtoadjustmyscheduleandcan’tmakepresenceon…=3\*romaniii.ThismorningmyEnglishteachertoldmethatIwaschosentorepresentourschooltotakepartinthe…Asyouknow,Ilike…verymuch,andthereforeItreasurethischancealot./itisofcrucialsignificancetome=4\*romaniv.MyuncleisreturninghomefromFrance,andIhavetopickhimupattheairportat…tomorrowafternoon(時間可根據(jù)要求調(diào)整)=2\*GB3②自己生病(比較嚴(yán)重，醫(yī)生囑咐要休息幾天)(強(qiáng)調(diào)具體癥狀及醫(yī)生囑咐)=3\*GB3③家人生病(一位家人生病，其余家人忙于工作或出差不在家等)(強(qiáng)調(diào)自己別無選擇)=1\*romani.Butnow,muchtomyregretthatImaynotbeabletokeepmypromisebecausemysisterwasinjuredinacaraccident.=2\*romanii.Imustlookafterherinthehospitalforseveraldaysgiventhatallmyfamilyarenowbusydealingwiththeaccidentwhichhappenedsuddenly.=4\*GB3④其他人生病(自己送病人去醫(yī)院，用于過去的事件)(自己需要代替病人完成某事，用于未發(fā)生事件)=1\*romani.Butthepersonwhowasoriginallyappointedtoitisnowseriouslyillinhospital.=2\*romanii.Ihavebeenaskedtotakehis/herplacetoattendthe…=3\*romaniii.Idoreckonthatatpresentanyexplanationispaleandfutile.However,onmywaytomeetyou,anoldladysuddenlyfaintedduetoheartattackonthebus.=4\*romaniv.Isentherintoanearbyhospitalandstayedthereuntilhersoncame,whichspoiledourappointment.打壞物品或弄丟東西=1\*GB3①因為想要清理/仔細(xì)觀看等原因不小心摔壞Eg.Ioccasionallyfoundthefaceofthe…wasdirtywhensweepingthefloor,soItookitdownandcleanitwithapieceofsoftcloth.Unexpectedly,whenIputitbackwhereitwas,itfelloffanddroppedontotheground.=2\*GB3②由于著急忘在別處，且無法找回Eg.IlikeitsomuchthatItookitwhereverIwent.Unfortunately,theotherdayduringthetripto…IwasinsuchahurrytogetoffthetrainthatIforgottoputitbackinmybag.=3\*GB3③小心放置，但被偷，且無法找回Eg.Iputitinmyschoolbagafterwemetyesterday.Butitissadthatitwasstolenonmywayhome.Itriedtogetitbackbutfailed.HowangryandguiltyIfelt!其他Owingto…,I’munabletosparetimeto…asscheduled.ThereasonwhyIcan’tkeepmypromiseisthat…Whattroublesmeisthat…whichledtomyabsence.It’sapitythat…Asaresult,Ihavenochoicebutto……提供補(bǔ)救措施，尋求原諒Bytheway,canwehavedinnertogethersometimenextweek?IsitpossiblethatImakeupthelossby…?Ifso,Iwill…Maybewecanfixanothertimeto…aslongasyouareavailable.Pleaseacceptmysincereapologyfrommybottomofmyheart.Willyoubeavailableon…oryoucantellmewhenitisconvenientforyou.IpromisethatIwilltightenmybeltthesedaystogetyouacompletelynewonebytheendofthismonth.IamreallysorryforallthetroubleandinconvenienceIhavecaused.…6.感謝信感謝信是指在日常學(xué)習(xí)和生活中，當(dāng)接受饋贈，邀請，照顧，慰問，祝賀后，給對方道謝的信件。感謝信應(yīng)寫的真誠，具體，及時。內(nèi)容通常包括：1.表明寫信原因；2.給出感謝的原因和細(xì)節(jié)；3.再次致謝。表明寫信原因I’mwritingtoextend/express/conveymysincere/heartfeltgratitudefor…(感謝的原因)I’mwritingtotellyouthat…Thankstoyour…,I…I’mwritingthislettertothankyoufor…I’dliketotakethisopportunitytoexpressmygreatappreciationforyourtimelyhelpandassistance.Ioweyouagreatdealfor……2.感謝的原因及細(xì)節(jié)Ifithadnotbeenyourassistancein…(對方給予的具體幫助),IfearthatIwouldhave…(沒有對方幫助的后果).Butfor/Withoutyourhelp/guidance,Iwouldn’thavemadesuchprogress.Everyoneagreesthatitwasyouwho…(給出幫助細(xì)節(jié))Itwasyourhelpthat…(強(qiáng)調(diào)句)Honestlyspeaking,butforyourhelp,Iwouldn’thavemadesuchprogressin…Withyourhelp,I…(取得的具體成就)Youalwaysdowhatyoucantohelpothersregardlessofrewards.Underyourprofessionalguide,…Besides,you…,whichhelpedme…Themosttouchingandwarmestexperiencewas…Thankyouverymuchforyourkindhospitalityandthehonoryoushowedmeduringmyvisit.Itwaskindandgenerousofyoutodothisforme,andIappreciateitmorethanIcansay.…3.再次致謝，表達(dá)祝愿Manythanksforyourkindnessandhospitality/timeandsupport.Myappreciationtoyouforyourgeneroushelpisbeyondmywords.IwishIcouldrepayitsomeday.WordsfailmewhenIwanttoexpressmygratitudetoyou.Iwishtoexpressmyprofoundappreciationfor…Ihopesomedayyouwillcometo…andIshallreturnyourkindness.Ican’tthankyoumore,andIhopeinthenearfutureyou’dliketovisit…Then,Iwilltrymybesttopayyouback.Nothingcouldeverreturnthefavoryougaveme.Mytruegratitudeisbeyondtheworld’sdescription.IfeeldeeplyindebtedtoyouandIreallydonotknowhowtothankyouenoughforyourhelp.7.投訴信寫投訴信的目的是請求幫助解決問題，比如消費利益受損，正常生活和工作受到干擾等。投訴信的寫信步驟為：1.自我介紹，交代投訴內(nèi)容，表明寫信目的；2.說明情況，分析利弊，告訴對方你因此收到的傷害或遭受的麻煩，提出解決問題的建議；3.表達(dá)希望問題得到迅速恰當(dāng)?shù)慕鉀Q。表明寫信目的，交代投訴內(nèi)容Iamwritingtoyoutocomplainabout…Iwanttoexpressmydissatisfactionwith…Ihatetobringthisupbut…/Ireallyhatetocomplainbutonethingisreallydisturbingnow.IfeelbadtotroubleyoubutIamafraidthatIhavetomakeacomplaintabout…Iwasapassenger/customerof…I’mwritingtomakeacomplaintabouttheservice/productIreceived,andaskforreasonablecompensation.I’mwritingtobringyourattentiontoanunpleasantexperienceIhadinyour……說明情況，提出解決方案Ienjoyed…,butthe…drovememad.…can’tmeetwithmydemands.Whatalsodisappointedmewasthat…Thereasonformydissatisfactionis…Inthefirstplace,…Inaddition,…Underthesecircumstances,Ifindit…(感覺)to…(不好的情況所帶來的后果)Notonlywasthe…(產(chǎn)品等)severelydamaged/extremelyoverpriced(出現(xiàn)的問題),butthequalitywasfarfrom/anythingbutsatisfactory(出現(xiàn)的另一個問題)Muchtomyappointment,…What’sworse/worsestill/tomakemattersworse,…Now,thisproblemkeepsworryingme.…bringsmemuchinconvenience,actuallyspoilingmygoodmood.Beingunreasonablyhighinpriceandoflowquality,…isfarfromsatisfactory.Ithinkit’shightimethatyourealized…Toimprovethesituation,youcantakethefollowingmeasures.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucould…(提出建議或要求),preferably…(進(jìn)一步的要求).It’sreasonableformetoexpectsomecompensationforyourfailuretoobservethisregulation.Iamsorrytohavereceivedsuchpoorservice,andIbelieveIhavetheveryrighttoaskyoutodealwiththisproblem.Iwonderwhetherornotyoucan…Ihopeyoucaneither…(returnthemoney)or…(sendmeanewone)…希望問題能夠得到解決AndIwouldliketohavethismattersettledby…(設(shè)定解決問題的最后日期)I’dliketobeinformedoftheprocessofyourdealingwithmycomplaint.Ihopeyouwillgivedueattentiontomyproblem.Itwouldbeappreciatedifyoucantakemycomplaintsseriously,andmakeeveryefforttoimproveyourserviceinthefuture.ThanksforyourconsiderationandIamlookingforwardtoyourreply.…